paper outline

introduction:

what we use technology for, how we spend so much on it, and spend so much time on it.

thesis: 

Technology brainwashes us into brainless zombie who become so dependent on it.

paragraph 1:

the interviews i did with friends, family, and strangers, how i felt after doing my video project, and after watching other peoples videos, self-experment.

Paragraph 2:

how much money people spent on all the technology in their houses, TV's, computers, PS2, X-box, gameboys, cells/phones. Get informations from a article on how much people spent on them, like a graph, percentages.

Paragraph 3:

how being on technology is bad for our health, obesity, lack of sleep. How it affects our self esteem.

Connections:

connections between real life and the book Feed, and Wall-E (?).

Opposing viewpoints:

the article that says that using the computer at school actually helps make kids smarter

Significance:

how technology affects us, and how it has a negative affect on us.

Conclusion:

summarize everything.